LITERATURE
LIBRARY - THE POINT SHORT STORY
THE
POINT
A short
story by C. A. Passinault
Based
on a true story
©
Copyright 2002, 2007, 2010 C. A. Passinault. All rights reserved.
I've
never been scared before.
At least not before that night.
It was the early 1990's, and I was working as an Insurance agent
in a building south of the Courtney Campbell Causeway. The building
that my company worked in was called "the Point", and
it towered over a cluster of restaurants across the street that
line the shoreline of Tampa Bay.
You know the Restaurants. Whiskey Joes. Crawdaddys, which was also
a nightclub. The Rusty Pelican, one of Tampa's best places to eat.
I know because my coworkers and I ate there every Friday after work,
before walking over to the club and dancing until one or two in
the morning. Sometimes, some of us would pick up some hot girl in
the club, and more often than not, would indulge with our new acquaintance
before we made it home. God, that parking garage has lots of memories.
The south end of Rocky Point was a single man's playground.
One of those Friday nights, I hit it big. I was at the bar in Crawdaddys,
slamming shooters. One by one, I slammed them down. The dance floor
blurred around me, and I lost count on how many I had. I swayed
into the swirling mass of color, and in the middle of it was this
goddess. I must have been able to talk, because we actually had
some sort of conversation. Her name was Kristi, she was a Gemini,
and I was in love again. I told her that I was rich.
Kristi and I made our way to the parking garage. People were wearing
heavy coats outside, which was unusual for Florida, but it was a
really cold night that night. I didn't care. I was hot. I was down
to my T-shirt, which was soaked in sweat, and I wrapped an arm around
Kristi. Kristi told me that I needed to put something on before
I got sick. I laughed. Why bother? Why put something on when I would
only be taking it off again in a few minutes? Besides, I really
was hot.
Kristi told me that I drank too much. I told her that she worried
too much.
Kristi told me that we were going to take her car. I didn't mind,
as long as it had a big back seat. I forgot to ask her that. We
had to climb a series of stairs, and I hit my head on a wall when
this top step got in my way. She managed to help break my fall.
The weird thing is that it didn't hurt.
Her damn car was a two seater. A convertible, one of those Miata's.
Was it going to be her place, my place, or a sardine can? She helped
me in, then walked around the car to the drivers side. The parking
garage was quiet. I got dizzy, and closed my eyes. I listened to
the hollow clack clack of her high heels bounce off the concrete.
Weird. I was about to have heaven.
The drivers door shut. I pulled her to me, and gave her a kiss.
She tasted good; definitely a non smoker. I liked them like that.
She pushed away. Her blonde hair draped over her bare shoulder,
leading the eye to her low cut dress.
"Listen, you're too drunk."
I blinked.
"Sorry."
She smiled. "How about we go to Dennys and get some coffee?
I'd really like to talk to you some more."
I stammered.
"Talk? About what?"
"Tell me more about your family. I'd really like to hear more,
Kevin."
This was really weird. Why was she so interested in my family?
"What about them?"
"It's sad." She looked away, down to her door, "Will
you ever get over her?"
"Who?" I demanded.
"Your fiancé. What was her name....um..... Cameron?"
"How do you know about Cammy?"
I felt that. It felt like a brick hitting me in the chest. I winced,
and went stiff in the soft seat. I closed my eyes. I tried to distract
myself with the overpowering fragrance of Kristi's perfume, which
seemed to coexist with the interior of her car. God. I hope that
the smell wouldn't stay with me. My room mate would call me a fag.
I turned to her.
"You told me. When did she die?"
"Uh, she died a year ago."
Kristi seemed to be annoyed. She gave me a PMS glare.
"Is there really a Cammy?"
"Yes, there is."
"You're not fucking with me, are you?"
I Smiled back.
"Of course I am not."
"Jesus." She hissed, "You are fucking with me. You're
so blasted, you can't even keep your sorry ass pickup line lies
straight."
The car started to spin around my head. I groaned.
"Get out. I don't have time for this."
She reached over me and opened my door. Her breast grazed my arm.
I placed my hand on her ass.
She looked me in the eye. She seemed dark, cold. Her eyes sucked
me in.
"Get the fuck out of my CAR! Do you hear me?!?!?"
I threw up on her. I spewed like a fountain. Red and blue. She got
it. Her sardine can got it. Justice was served. God help her get
THAT smell out of her car.
"Asshole!" Kristi shrieked, "Fucking asshole!"
The car spun again. I fell out. My head hit the pavement.
The door slammed shut. I closed my eyes. I felt that, too. When
I opened them, Kristi, and her smelly car, were gone.
My body hurt. My head hurt. Damn, my buzz was gone. So were my chances
of getting laid tonight. Maybe I DID drink too much.
I crawled to my feet and made my way to the wall of the second floor
parking garage facing the club. The parking lot was almost empty.
It was also a lot colder. I shivered. I realized that I was only
wearing a t-shirt that was saturated with sweat and puke. I shook
my head. The Bitch took off with my shirt, tie, and coat. Just great.
I glanced down at my watch. How the hell long was I out, anyway?
4:15 AM. I didn't know what time we had left the club, but it had
to be well before 3 when we did. My head throbbed. I wondered if
I had a concussion. I was definitely out for a while. Damn. I didn't
even get to find out if she swallowed.
I walked to my car. It was locked up on the top level, which was
two flights up. The air was still, cold. The dampness sent a chill
in my bones. My teeth clattered. I couldn't stop them. Bursts of
breath clouded my way.
It was quiet, dead. I'd never seen the parking garage this barren
before. Hell, I'd never been here this late before.
"Help me."
I stopped. Glanced around. What the fuck was that?
I heard something that sounded like a soda can being kicked. It
clattered, echoed. I couldn't tell where it came from.
The air was heavy. My breath hung in the air in front of me. God,
it was still.
I started walking to my car again. I took the long way and avoided
the stairwells. I figured the exercise would warm me up and clear
my head. One flight to go. I trudged up a ramp toward the upper
level.
"Please help me."
I stopped. The hair on the back of my neck prickled. I heard that.
It was like a whisper behind my ear. I felt cold bursts of icy breath.
The air was still, quiet. I felt a cold sensation sweep over my
arm.
I began to run up the ramp.
Air roared past my ears. The painted lines on the cement jiggled
with each stride. I started to lose my breath. My car was just ahead.
The air stabbed into my chest like a knife with each breath. God,
was I out of shape. This air was damn cold! I resisted the urge
to stop, double over, and catch my breath. There was something weird
in this garage, and I was about to piss my pants.
I reached the car, catching myself on the hood as I stopped. I fumbled
for my keys. Another icy sensation.
My pockets were empty.
I screamed in frustration. The air continued its assault on my chest.
My throat hurt from the cold. I wanted to leave. Where in the hell
were my keys?
I heard another whisper. This one hissed. It sounded like air being
let out of a tire. I looked down at mine. They were fine. I looked
around. Fog hung in the stagnant air, making light rings around
the street lights. The only movement were my breaths.
I screamed into the fog. "Why don't you help ME?!?! Where in
the hell are my keys?!?!??!"
My voice echoed back. Silence answered me. My head hurt.
I kicked my car. The alarm went off. God, it was loud.
The elevator leading down to the lower levels was close by. I marched
off to it. I didn't have to wait for it to open. On the second level
was a breezeway corridor that led to the building. I had to get
to a phone.
The elevator smelled like piss. It let me out just before I was
asphyxiated. My head throbbed from the stink, as I was still breathing
hard and inhaled more than my share of the stench. Did they ever
clean this thing?
I left the elevator, and entered the breeze way. A bitter cold,
soft wind blew around me, and I could hear my car alarm still going
off. I shuddered, certain that my lips were blue. This was not my
night.
I heard foot steps ahead of me. I stopped. They were coming for
me.
"Can I help you?"
A gruff voice rattled me. An old, feeble bodied security guard sauntered
up to me. I was happy to see him. I was happy to see anyone.
He looked me over, then spoke again. He had a firm, scratchy tone
to his voice.
"What's wrong?"
"Nothing." I replied without a second thought.
"Are you alright?"
He seemed to be interrogating me.
"Yeah. Why wouldn't I be?"
He looked toward the noise of my alarm.
"That your car doing that?"
I paused. Caught my breath. Looked at him. I recognized this security
guard. He was always sitting in a corner at the front of the building
when I came in to work. He always seemed to be whittling wood with
a pocketknife. Until now, that was the only movement that I've ever
seen from him. He seemed to be alive now.
"Yeah, it is. I lost my keys."
"You have a spare set?"
"No. Do you have a slim jim?"
The guard stopped. He seemed to be quizzing himself.
"What kind of car is it?"
"It's a corolla."
"Do you have air bags?"
"What?"
"What kind of air bags does it have?"
I couldn't believe this guy. Who the fuck cared about my air bags?
I couldn't get in. That was my problem. Did he have a slim jim or
not?
"Side impact and door." I replied.
"Jesus, sir, I have one of those, but I'll be damned if I'll
use it to open up your car."
"Why not?"
"How you gonna start it when you get in? You gonna hot wire
it?"
He had a point. I thought momentarily, realizing that this could
be a trick question.
"Of course not! The alarm won't let it start, anyway."
"Damn right, kid."
This guy was starting to annoy me. He shifted his weight, and smiled
at me. It was broken.
"Can't open it anyway. That jimmy could trigger the door air
bag, and it would kill me when it shot back out. It's not worth
dying for."
I shuddered. He made sense. I never thought of that.
The alarm stopped.
"Kind of cold to be dressed like that, isn't it?"
"Yes, it is." I retorted, "I had a bad night."
I looked away. I felt anxious; a mixture of fear, frustration, and
annoyance with this shell of a man.
"Sure you did. I watch you."
"What the hell is that supposed to mean?"
I raised my voice.
"You work for that Insurance company in the building. You and
your friends think that you're in charge. You fuck girls in the
garage."
"How do you know that?"
"I watch you. I watched you once."
"Really, guy, this old perv stuff is fucked up!"
The guard stared at me. His jaw slacked. He looked nervous.
"You- you heard her, didn't ya?"
"What?"
"You did. I hear her, too.
His voice was grim.
"Who do you hear?"
"She exists in there. I hear her all the time. I do."
"Who do you hear?" I asked. This was starting to creep
me out.
He laughed. It came out like a cackle.
"Wanna hear a story?"
I shrugged.
"Sure, if you help me get back in my car. I just want to go
home."
We walked into the building, and the man called me a tow truck.
He got me a maintenance coat. I was grateful for the warm clothes,
even if they had grease stains on them.
"Let's go outside and wait for the truck."
It sounded more like an order.
We walked back out through the breeze way. It was colder. I looked
at my watch.
5:00 AM.
We stopped by the stairwell. He lit up a cigarette.
"Smoke?"
I winced, feeling nauseous again.
"No thanks. Are those things Camels?"
They smelled worse than the Elevator did. I started to wonder what
happened to Kristi. She was pretty pissed off at me, but what if
something happened to her? What if it was her voice that I heard?
It sure sounded like her. What if she were hurt? No one deserved
that.
"Listen." I broke the silence, "I think that I heard
some thing earlier. It sounded like a woman asking for help. Do
you want to walk with me and see if anyone is in here? I met this
girl tonight, and I'm afraid that it might be her."
The guard stared into the Garage. There was a blank expression on
his face. He took a slow drag on the cigarette.
"Sure. I'll walk with you. Gotta make my rounds soon anyway.
First, I'm gonna tell you a story."
"What story?"
I had almost forgotten about his creepy ramble.
"A few years ago, I worked here. There was this girl that worked
on the ninth floor. She was magnificent. Beautiful, intelligent,
great personality. She was a beauty queen, let me tell you."
I shook my head.
"A beauty queen? Why was she working here?"
He didn't seem to get my attempt at humor.
"Don't know that, but she was a sharp cookie. She had this
boyfriend, see, and they used to have lunch down by the water every
day at the tables."
His eyes seemed to well up with tears.
"Did ya see that big iron gate down by the end of Rocky point?"
"Yeah. They keep it shut after five. It's the only way to get
to the other side of the building."
"Ever wonder why we close it?"
"Not really. No."
"It was because of her."
"Her?"
"The girl. Her name was Jenny. One day, her boyfriend couldn't
make it for lunch, and she was disappointed. He called her up that
afternoon, though, apologized, and planned to make it up for dinner.
He told her that it was a surprise."
"What happened then?" I asked.
He took another drag. Exhaled. His voice broke.
"We were friends. We used to talk. She was all excited, and
told me that she thought he was going to ask her to marry him. She
had been saving herself for him, you see......"
I wasn't buying this. A virgin beauty queen working in an office
building? Right.
"He met her after work, and they walked over to the Rusty Pelican
to have dinner. He asked her to marry him, and she accepted. They
were really happy on the way back. They walked by the Gazebo. They
talked. They kissed. I saw it."
"I bet you did." I interjected. I couldn't believe this
pervert.
He started to get upset.
"Let me guess, you were heartbroken, right?"
"She was my friend. My only friend. It wasn't right."
He started crying.
I didn't know what to say. I kind of felt sorry for the old buzzard.
I looked around. Was that the wrecker down below?
He started to sob. I had to say something.
"Maybe they were meant to be together. Weren't you happy for
Jenny?"
I put my hand on his shoulder. Poor guy.
"Y-yes, I was."
He dropped the cigarette. The ember broke off when it hit the ground,
and winked out.
"Then why are you so upset?"
I didn't understand this.
"They walked back, and crossed the parking circle up front.
This car came floored through the entrance, and hit her."
"Oh my God!"
"She died in my arms. She begged me to help her, and there
was nothing that I could do. She wasn't ready to die.... wasn't
ready. Oh, God! She kept crying for me to help her. I couldn't.
There was nothing....... nothing I could do."
He cried softly, as if resigned to what had happened.
I shuddered again. The coat was letting the cold in.
"Listen, I lost someone that I cared about, too. I had a Fiancé,
and she died. I know what her Fiancé, and you, went through.
I miss Cameron."
He looked up. Tears were streaming down the narrow creases that
showcased his face. The broken smile emerged again.
"Really? Does she talk to you?"
"Uh, no. She's gone."
I was beginning to wonder about this guys sanity.
"I had it rough for a while. I missed Jenny. It wasn't until
she talked to me one night that I understood. I believe that she
talked to you, too."
"Listen, I have a knot on my head. I did hear something, but
I think it was my concussion talking."
I motioned to the knot on my head. It still hurt.
"Maybe you should go to the Hospital, then." He miffed.
"Maybe I should, I don't know" I replied, "I do figure
that I'll be ok."
"Jenny told me that she was coming for me. She told me to wait."
"Oh..... OK......"
"She'll come for you too."
"Let her come." I resigned. I was getting the creeps again.
The Guard recomposed himself, and lit another cigarette. To my joy,
the wrecker showed up. It was a beat up flat bed tow truck. A large
man built like Jabba the Hut was driving.
"Your ride is here." The guard announced, stating the
obvious.
"Thank you for your help, guy!" I beamed as I jumped into
the truck, "Thanks for the story, too. Can I give you some
advice?"
The buzzard nodded.
"Get help."
The guard frowned.
"You heard her. I know it. She'll come for you, too. There's
a reason."
Whatever. I had a car to get home.
Jabba and I drove to the top level, and he expertly hooked up my
car. A breeze whistled around us.
I laughed.
Whatever.
We drove off, and I began to feel at ease. Jabba tried to talk to
me, which I recollected couldn't be any worse than the weirdo security
guard.
"Rough night, eh, buddy?" He quipped.
"Yeah. You could say that."
He laughed loudly.
"You don't have it as bad as I saw this one gal tonight over
in Clearwater. She was at a service station, hosing puke out of
her car. Someone always has it worse."
I shrugged and smiled. Someone.
By Monday, I had recovered from my weekend. The knot on my head
had almost gone down, and I was ready for another week of working
hard. This weekend, though, I'd have to play catch up. Anyway, there
was this really hot girl in the office. Her name was Jessica, and
she was the type to lead the guys on all day at the office and work
out at the gym the rest of the night. I really wanted to sleep with
her, and she knew it. She seemed to take particular delight in torturing
me daily, and sentencing me to lonely isolation in a cold shower
at home when I left work empty handed. On this day, though, she
seemed friendlier, and was not being shy with the flirting. She
came by my desk before lunch, and asked if I would spend it with
her.
Off course I would.
It was great, until she told me to meet me at the tables by the
waterfront in front of the building.
Why did I feel so uneasy?
I met her there. She had some food from Whiskey Joe's, and offered
to share it with me. God, she was a dish! The sunlight traced over
her golden hair. For a moment, I imagined that the shafts of light
were my fingers.
"Kevin, I really needed to talk to you today." She said,
poking slowly at her food. She intertwined a finger through, then
around, a strand of hair. I was transfixed on the finger play.
"About what?" I asked. I was surprised that I was coming
across as cooly as I was.
"I feel bad about the way that I've been treating you."
She confessed, shifting forward to me, "You probably think
that I'm a tease."
"Uh, not at all." I wheezed, finally showing a tiny bit
of nervousness, "What caused the change of heart?"
"Well, I do have a heart. I really do. You've been so patient
with me. You've been so sweet to me, too. I'm sorry if I have been
unfair with you."
"It's ok."
"So, do you want to ask me something?"
Did I?
"Sure I do. Would you like to have dinner with me tonight?"
She paused. My heart sank.
"I'm sorry, but I have plans. I'm free on Friday, though."
She smiled. We both did.
We ate, and talked. I found out a lot about her. She was the proud
owner of a hyper, yappy chihuahua. She loved art. She also knew
all about what happened with Cammy. It was a good lunch. It felt
magical.
She took my arm as we walked back, the round drive beneath our feet.
She leaned into me, and whispered in my ear.
"If you wait for me, I'll come for you."
A chill ran up my spine. I looked down the entry drive at the black
iron gate. It rattled in the breeze. For the first time, I looked
down at our feet. The driveway was made up of precision cut stones,
forming a cobblestone like surface. My eyes widened. There were
bloodstains in the seams. I was sure of it.
"Wait?"
My voice trembled.
"For Friday, silly. I'm looking forward to getting to know
you."
She giggled, and pulled me to her, kissing me on the cheek.
I managed a smile. I needed a drink.
Was this a beginning, or the end?
I didn't know. I took her by the arm, and we returned to the building.
Who knew what was to come? I did find out one thing, though. The
security guard disappeared that week. One day he was whittling,
barely looking up, and the next gone. No one knows what happened
to him. I'm never going in that garage at night anymore, that much
I'm sure of.
As far as Jessica was concerned, she was an adventure all in herself.
That's another story, though. As far as this one, I still have questions
that will never be answered. Some things, though, aren't meant to
have answers. The price would be too high.
The
price may be one's sanity.
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